How to Write a Job Description That Attracts the Right Talent and Scares Away the Wrong
We all have. They're a boring, copy-pasted laundry list of
internal jargon, buzzwords and impossible demands. We write that we need
"10 years of dairy plant management experience" for a role that the
by-laws or R & S policy have locked at a "Production Executive"
pay grade and then we wonder why our inbox is full of unqualified candidates.
I've learned the hard way that a job description isn't just
an HR chore. It's your #1 sales pitch to the talent market. Its job is to be
both a magnet for the people you want and a filter for the people you don't. If
your JDs are failing, don't blame the talent pool. Fix the bait. Here's the practical guide.
Step 1: Sell the Mission, Not the Tasks
The first paragraph is your most valuable real estate. Why
do we waste it with a summary that's just a 10-line paragraph of
corporate-speak? The first thing a candidate should read is the "Why."
Why should they stop what they're doing, update their resume, and go through
your entire interview process?
Here's the "Before" (The bad one we all write):
"We are seeking a dynamic, results-oriented HR
Generalist to join our fast-paced team. The ideal candidate will be responsible
for managing day-to-day HR operations, including recruitment, onboarding, and
compliance..."
(My eyes glazed over just typing that. It's full of
"filler" words and attracts everyone.)
Here's the "After" (The one that gets a click):
"Our HR team has a problem: we're growing so fast that
our managers are drowning in hiring. We're looking for an HR Generalist who
wants to build a recruiting machine from the ground up, own the onboarding
process, and be the go-to expert for our 50-person team. If you love solving
problems and hate being bored, this is for you."
The "After" version attracts a problem-solver
who wants ownership. It scares away the person who just wants to follow a
pre-built plan.
Step 2: Write "Outcomes," Not "Tasks"
As managers, we get stuck in a "task" mindset. But
A-Players, the talent you really want, don't care about your to-do list.
They care about what they get to own. Your JD should describe what they
will achieve, not just what they will do.
Stop writing this (Tasks):
- "Run
monthly reports"
- "Handle
employee paperwork"
- "Post
job openings"
Start writing this (Outcomes):
- "You
will own the monthly analytics report that our leadership team uses
to make strategic decisions."
- "You
will create a world-class onboarding experience that makes every
new hire feel like a 'Day 1' priority."
- "You
will design and execute the talent sourcing strategy to find our
next top performers."
One is a list of chores. The other is a list of
responsibilities. This simple change filters for leaders, not just
"doers."
Step 3: The Big Exception: Honesty in a Rigid World
Now, I know what some of you are thinking, especially those
of you in cooperatives or the public sector. You're saying, this is a nice theory, but I don't have
this creative control. JD development is solely HR's job. My draft has to strictly
follow the by-laws or R & S Policy, fit a uniform pay structure
and get approved by the CEO/MD before it can ever be
published."
You're right. I've been there.
In this case, you use the rigidity itself as the
filter. You can't sell "flexibility," so you sell "stability."
You can't sell "high-growth," so you sell "clear
mission."
- Startup
Honesty: "We're a startup. The process isn't set. You will be
building the plane while you fly it. If you need a perfect manual to do
your job, you will be frustrated here."
- Cooperative
Honesty: "This is a stable, public-oriented organization. Your
role is clearly defined by our by-laws, and success is measured by your
compliance, attention to detail, and reliable service to our members. If
you are not a patient, high-communication person, this is not the role for
you."
Both of these are "scare away" filters. One
filters out the person who needs rules, and the other filters out
the person who hates them. Both are honest.
Step 4: Separate "Must-Haves" from "Nice-to-Haves"
This is a mistake I see everywhere. We create a wish list of
15 "requirements" that scares away perfectly good candidates. Be
honest: what are the 3-4 things you truly cannot live without?
Must-Haves (The Deal-Breakers):
- Example:
3+ years of direct recruitment experience.
- Example:
A deep understanding of Indian labour law.
Nice-to-Haves (The Bonus Points):
- Example:
Experience with our HRIS software.
- Example:
A certification in [XYZ].
This distinction is crucial. It encourages high-potential
candidates to apply. An impossible list of 15 requirements just makes them
close the tab.
Putting It All Together: A Real-World Example
So, what does this look like in practice? Here is a complete
JD for a Marketing Manager that combines the "Sell" (the mission)
with the "Checklist" (the requirements).
|
Section |
Details |
|
Job Title |
Marketing Manager |
|
Department |
Marketing & Sales |
|
Industry |
FMCG (Fast-Moving Consumer
Goods) |
|
Location |
[City, State, e.g., XXX,
Gujarat] |
|
Reporting To |
Head (Marketing) / General
Manager (Sales & Marketing) |
|
Your Mission |
Our brand is on every shelf,
but not yet in every cart. We're looking for a hands-on manager who is bored
of just "managing" a brand and wants to build
one. Your mission is to ignite our sales channels (General Trade, Modern
Trade) with real consumer connection, smart digital campaigns, and a trade
marketing strategy that our partners will love. This is a "boots on the
ground" role, not an "ivory tower" one. |
|
Key Responsibilities (What
You'll Own) |
· Brand Strategy: Develop and implement brand
strategy, ensuring consistent messaging from a Facebook ad to a kirana store
poster. · Product & Category
Management:
Support product launches, packaging, pricing, and work with R&D on new
product ideas. · Trade Marketing: Design and execute all
trade schemes, retailer offers, loyalty programs, and in-store visibility
(POS materials). · Market Research: Be our "eyes and
ears." Conduct regular store checks and consumer surveys to track
competitor strategies. · Digital & Social Media: Oversee our agencies to
build a community, not just collect "likes. · Sales Collaboration: Align all marketing with
sales targets; provide the sales team with the training and sales kits they
need to win. · Budget Management: Plan, track, and control
the entire marketing budget and be fully accountable for its ROI. · Performance Tracking &
Reporting: Prepare
weekly, monthly, and quarterly marketing performance reports. Measure ROI of
marketing spends and optimize resource utilization. Present insights and
recommendations to senior management. |
|
Qualifications &
Experience (The "Must-Haves") |
· MBA / PGDM in Marketing from
a reputed institute · 6 to 10 years of hands-on
experience in FMCG marketing, brand management, or trade marketing · Proven experience working
with General Trade (GT), Modern Trade (MT), and understanding rural/urban
market dynamics. |
|
Skills & Attributes (The
"What Makes You Great") |
· A strong commercial and
analytical mindset—you are driven by results, not just "brand
awareness." · Excellent communication and
stakeholder management skills. · Experience managing
agencies, vendors, and cross-functional teams. · A creative mindset and the execution discipline to get things done in
the field. |
|
How Success Will Be Measured
(KPIs) |
· Verifiable market share
growth in your key territories. · Increase in brand awareness
and consumer engagement metrics. · Successful, on-time
execution of product launches. · Positive feedback from the
sales team and trade partners. |
|
What We Offer |
|
Your Job Description is Your First Interview
A lazy, copy-pasted job description is your first signal to the world that your company's culture is probably lazy, too. A sharp, honest and exciting job description even within the rules of a cooperative or government agency proves that you are a high-performing team that values clarity and respects a candidate's time.
The "wrong" candidates will stop wasting your time. The "right" candidates will be more excited than ever to apply.
What's the most annoying phrase you always see in job descriptions? Let me know in the comments.
- By Mit
HR Professional

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